Hah! Those pathetic New Yorkers can't even hold a position for a whole day! They need some tough Jersey boys to hold their position!
On a serious note though: You write quite fine.
Chapter Three
Calm Marching
(Sorry for it being so short, its ment to be a chapter to introduce a quite action packed chapter, again sorry)
Nice job man! Keep it up!
Member of Timberwolf Brigade
Loving it!
To the Colors!
Captain Lance Rawlings
Company K, 38th North Carolina, Pender's Brigade, A.P. Hill's Division, Jackson's Corps, Army of Northern Virginia
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"Thomas! Wheres Chapter 5?"
Welp Ive Been Working On An English Report And Its Been Taking Most Of My Time, But Good News, The Report Is An Alternate Version of The Story Ive Been Writing Anyway, So Due To The Lack Of Posting Ive Been Doing, Heres Chapter 4.5, Shipwrecked.
To the Colors!
Captain Lance Rawlings
Company K, 38th North Carolina, Pender's Brigade, A.P. Hill's Division, Jackson's Corps, Army of Northern Virginia
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